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Being the First Movement of Spirit of Truth

The Truth Dancer

L.R. Merriman

“Truth has power, Inquisitor. It changes the listener. Once heard, it cannot be unheard.”

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The Prelude

Read the opening letter.

Your Justice, High Inquisitor Sirius,

Greetings in the name of His Imperial Majesty Vaylen, Second of His Name, in this, the three hundred and eighth year of the Second Founding. May the light of truth burn ever brighter under his dominion.

It seemed good to me to write to you concerning the prisoner delivered this day into the keeping of your offices. I had hoped to present him in person, but I am informed you have been called away on duty in His Majesty’s service, and so this letter must serve.

The prisoner is Elenden deArthis, third son of the former Lord Aaron deArthis of the Northern Provinces, sought under outstanding warrants on charges of sedition, unlawful practice of the old rites, and dissemination of treasonous doctrine.

As you may recall, the Order proposed a standing incentive: title to the deArthis estates, forfeited upon Aaron’s conviction, to whichever citizen produced the fugitive. The bribe—forgive me, the incentive—proved effective, though not in the manner we anticipated.

Within three moons, we received an offer from one of the deArthis lordlings himself—a middle son, Corrin. He would deliver his brother on two conditions: full restoration of the family name and holdings, and the release of an aging heretic currently serving a life sentence in the capital. The prisoner would stand as blood-stead for the old man—his own confinement securing the other’s freedom. I confess I found the arithmetic elegant, if cold: brother trades brother for an estate, and we trade one prisoner for another.

Given the Inquisition’s stated urgency, I accepted the terms, acquired the prisoner at the appointed place, and prepared for treachery. The deArthis are not a family whose loyalty I credit. I am pleased to report that my foresight was not tested. The exchange proceeded without incident.

I have personally verified the prisoner’s identity against the descriptions on file. He is the man.

Please accept him as a token of good faith and a down payment on the matter we discussed when last we met. I trust you will find him worthy of your particular attention.

A word regarding the bindings. I have kept the prisoner’s mouth bound since the third day, permitting only broth through the cloth. I do not offer this as cruelty but as counsel. The man speaks, Your Justice, and when he speaks, things happen that I lack the vocabulary to describe. Two of my escort requested transfer within a day of hearing him. A third—a man of fourteen years’ service—wept and could not say why. Conventional deterrents proved ineffective. The bindings were, in the end, the only reliable solution. I advise you to maintain the precaution until your methods are established. Apart from the bindings, you will find him whole and responsive, as requested. A few bruises from the road—nothing that should impede your work.

Please forgive the informality of correspondence where I would have preferred to kneel.

Yours truly,

Sir Tiberian, Lightbringer of the Order of the Morning Star

Two Voices

A testimony, folded inside an interrogation.

Chapter 1: Merauve

The present · third person

The cock’s crow came like a brass trumpet blown by an enthusiastic but tone-deaf child. Merauve blinked awake, consciousness finding him sprawled across his bed like spilled wine across white linen.

“Well,” he murmured to the timber-beamed ceiling.

He stretched then, a languid unfolding that would have done credit to a wild animal, each muscle awakening with the deliberate care of a musician tuning his instrument. Arms extended in sequence with legs, fingers splayed and curled, even his toes pressed and released against the floorboards. Each position flowed into the next, the kind of control that transmuted breath into blade-work.

“We must make music from whatever notes the day provides us, mustn’t we, Tachet?”

The blade hung on its mount like a curse made manifest in steel, its length a great hand span of wicked sharp. It was a weapon stripped of all pretense, all decoration, all mercy. Simply blade and handle, thin as winter’s promise and twice as cutting. The blade understood its purpose completely. They were similar in that regard.

Chapter 4: deArthis

Memory · first person

I was born in the seventh moon of a wet year, when the Northern Provinces wore their summer rains like a cloak of glass beads. Third son to Aaron deArthis, I arrived late to the feast of inheritance: close enough to see the golden plates but far enough that no one expected me to reach for them. This was my first blessing, though I wouldn’t understand it as such for many years.

Our family’s line takes its name from a flower. The Arthis grows wild among those hills, though you need to know where to look. The plant itself is modest: a spread of soft green leaves that hug the ground in a rosette, from which rises a single stem no thicker than a child’s littlest finger. At its crown blooms a flower of five white petals, each no larger than a thumbnail. Pretty enough, but the Northern Provinces grow prettier flowers in abundance.

What made the Arthis remarkable was not its beauty but its behavior. From dawn to dusk, the bloom follows the sun’s path across the sky, devoted as a penitent. But at the slightest touch—a fingertip, a raindrop, even too strong a breeze—those petals would fold inward quick as thought, and the stem would bow until the flower nearly touched the ground. There it would remain, closed tight as a secret, sometimes for hours, sometimes for days.

A line drawing of a closed Arthis flower: a delicate stem curves in a shepherd’s crook, bowing a tightly folded bloom of five petals downward over a rosette of leaves.

“I was born Elenden deArthis, and I was raised to dance the Truth.”

The Editions

One tale in five movements.

The Truth Dancer complete edition ebook cover

The Complete Edition

All five staves in a single volume — ebook only.

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The Staves

One tale in five paperback volumes.

The Truth Dancer, Stave I of V: Earth — paperback cover

Stave I · Earth

They call his kind the True. Merauve calls him leverage.

Virtue
Fortitude
Chapters
1–16

“Nor gold, not jewels for a gift I bring,
But a more precious and a rarer thing.”

— Thomas Traherne
Stave I in paperback
The Truth Dancer, Stave II of V: Water — paperback cover

Stave II · Water

Merauve needed his prisoner to talk. Now he needs him as bait.

Virtue
Temperance
Chapters
17–33

“What sublime truths and wholesome themes
Lodge in thy mystical deep streams!
Such as dull man can never find
Unless that Spirit lead his mind.”

— Henry Vaughan
Stave II in paperback
The Truth Dancer, Stave III of V: Air — paperback cover

Stave III · Air

Everyone there competes. Elenden listens.

Virtue
Prudence
Chapters
34–45

“Who has seen the wind?
Neither I nor you:
But when the leaves hang trembling,
The wind is passing through.”

— Christina Rossetti
Stave III in paperback
The Truth Dancer, Stave IV of V: Spirit — paperback cover

Stave IV · Spirit

Haven takes all he carries. It cannot take who carries him.

Virtue
Love
Chapters
46–61

“A man that looks on glass,
On it may stay his eye;
Or if he pleaseth, through it pass,
And then the heav’n espy.”

— George Herbert
Stave IV in paperback
The Truth Dancer, Stave V of V: Fire — paperback cover

Stave V · Fire

The Inquisitor breaks men. This time he means to save one.

Virtue
Justice
Chapters
62–78

“Let her and Falsehood grapple;
who ever knew Truth put to the worse,
in a free and open encounter?”

— John Milton
Stave V in paperback
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Map of Thamaria: the Northern, Central, and Southern Provinces, with Thornwall and Cindrel Vale to the west and the Qiran Provinces and Eastern Reaches to the east.

The World

Thamaria

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Explore the world of Thamaria, where an empire drapes itself in the pageantry of the ancient Virtue schools even as it hunts their last adherents. In hidden monasteries the old ways survive: Fire and Justice, Earth and Fortitude, Air and Prudence, Water and Temperance, and a forbidden Fifth.

“Begin at the beginning, my dear boy.”